Hi Daniel! I think your video was great...I have been learning Cantonese for roughly 4 months now and I find that in order to improve my listening comprehension it's always very useful to listen to other learners' monologues. Granted, I am not an expert nor a native speaker but I think your Cantonese sounds pretty good. Now I'm considering making my own video - I feel that recording yourself and then watching yourself speaking a foreign language is a great way to check up on pronounciation and any other mistakes that one may make while in the process of talking and that you wouldn't normally notice. Anyways, keep it up!
PS: Very cute kids!
PS: Very cute kids!